User talk:Bjobs690

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Notes regarding Josh Bilicki[edit]

Hi there, I am glad to see that you created the page for Josh Bilicki. However, I have a few concerns regarding the page:

Your account's first edit was the page creation. Cut your teeth in Wikipedia by finding other pages to edit, and then move up to creating pages.
There were no sections on the page (to see an example of sections, look at Bilicki's updated page)
Bilicki was always called "Josh", there were no pronouns.
The entire article was unsourced. The only citation was thrown in at the end, and that was his personal site, which is prohibited as a source per Wikipedia's citation policy.
As I was doing research to improve the page, I saw that sections of the page were very close to being plagiarized, and the writing had slight tone issues.
The article had no links to other pages, even when there were exact matches. To add links, highlight text, and click the chain-link button in the toolbar.

Even so, thank you for your work done. I did not write this to belittle, just a few suggestions that I had while looking over the page. If you have any questions, contact me on my talk page. Thanks!Willsome429 (talk) 22:11, 14 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]