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hi i am andrew

hi andrew it me alice


Welcome!

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Hello, Congrenw, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:17, 27 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Tv55e52's Peer Review

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Please see below for my peer review:

  • "Job Performance," "Social Impacts," and "Relationships" are not the same size as "Culture" and "Innovation"; I assume they are meant to be the same size
  • Unnecessary to start the "Relationships" section with "in terms of relationships..."
  • Under "Culture," sentence would read better if it said: In collectivistic cultures, knowing the context and social status of the other person is essential to predicting their behavior.

Kaogra's Peer Review

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Hi Congrenw! I think your article was very well done. Some smaller things I noticed were that the subheadings under Social approach didn't seem to fit very well together. Perhaps rewording these to have a more parallel language could be helpful. In general, it seems that each section was given similar amounts of attention and no specific section stood out as underwhelming so goo djob on that! One more thing I would add is more about the different case studies under Historical context - Major case studies. They seem very brief, and could have more details. Kaogra (talk) 19:15, 13 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Close paraphrase on Self-monitoring

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Contributions submitted to wikipedia must be in your own words unless the content is available under a free license or there is no other way to rephrase the statement. See Wikipedia:Close_paraphrasing for more infromation on this policy. MorganKevinJ(talk) 19:23, 3 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]