User talk:DanyalUni

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:27, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

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Under history and taxonomy, I think ‘Grow in temperate and tropical environments’ and 'present in soil of grasses and grains' is more suitable under the Growth and morphology heading. There is some info from source 6 (Pimental 2005): In addition to growing in temperate and tropical environ + associating mainly w/ forage grasses and grains, authors also list strains being isolated from plants in Australia, and even Canada - Could make for information under the possible subheading ‘Distribution’. Under History and taxonmy, you should consider rewording to ‘is a rare pathogen and causes illness in humans such as peritonitis’, as what you currently have down is somewhat confusing. Also, these two points can be grouped under possible subheading 'Pathogenicity'. After looking through Pimental's (2005) article (source 6), they indicate that infection w/ Curvularia may be associated w/ soil-contact (as there are reported cases from individual who were playing in the woods/gardening). You could look into more information regarding this, as it could make for more quality content under Pathogenicity. In your final draft, you could take some time to explain sympodial growth so individuals uneducated in topic understand what you’re talking about. Again, you could explain halogenation reactions or link the word to the ‘halogenation’ wiki article just so readers understand what you’re talking about. For synonym Acrothecium arenarium, I think the authorized author is Moreau (according to mycobank) - You should consider fixing that so that the information you're providing is accurate. From Source 6, Pimental states Culvuria species can be susceptible to amphotericin B, itraconazole, etc. - This could be good content for under the subheading Physiology. It could also be listed under Pathogenicity but the topic is not well-studied enough as treatments against your fungus. From Source 6 (Pimental): C. inaequalis conidia are evenly coloured or have end cells that are slightly paler, are predominantly straight or only slightly curved, and are mostly five-celled, with the central cell larger than the others. This information can be used under morphology In your final draft, could explain what blighting is or link the word to wiki article ‘blight’ so readers can get a grasp of how it effects plants. There is a good balance in sources cited! A neutral POV is established, as you're not persuading others to follow certain ideas!Kikikhoun (talk) 17:42, 30 October 2019 (UTC)