User talk:Daphiez

Zandberg

Hello Dez. The reason I trimmed down your edits to the Zandberg article is because it looks like they were written by her PR agent. Examples include:

Zandberg is well known for her feminist world view and diverse activism.
Zandberg spear headed many initiatives
Zandberg took part in the urban Jane’s Walk and led a march for the protection of a local food store.

In addition, some of it is just opinion - e.g. "Zandberg realized that the social and economic crisis that the protests were reflecting were heightened by the sense of many people to the incompetence of the Histadrut" (which looks like it could only have been written by Zandberg herself) and "The law was blocked in the Labor and Welfare Committee, chaired by Chaim Katz who was advancing the interests of the industrialists", which is clearly an NPOV violation.

Another concern is that in your previous edits to her personal life section, you removed the detail that she was divorced, which made me a little suspicious that you are trying to airbrush her life history.

As I have many MK articles on my watchlist, I frequently see new accounts pop up that add lots of positive material in a very similar way to how you have been doing so (a lot of material has been added to the Ofir Akunis article in an almost identical way to how you added the material to the Zandberg article), so please forgive me for being suspicious. Cheers, Number 5 7 20:44, 26 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Number57 - Thanks for clarifying! Dez