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Hi Dustin,

I saw your page University of Washington College of Education while doing Page curation. I have a few suggestions to improve the page:

  • Make the first sentence say clearly what it is, and make the title of the page bold. Don't immediately link to "University of Washington" in the title. Take a look at Harvard Medical School for an example of what it should look like.
  • Putting a rather vague statement like "one of the top schools of education in the United States" in the first sentence sounds very promotional, even with a reference to support it. Maybe make it more quantifiable, e.g. "was rated as joint 14th best School of Education by US News in 2020".

Anyway, I hope you enjoy editing Wikipedia. If I can help in any way, please leave a note on my talk page. --Slashme (talk) 22:04, 3 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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