User talk:EGuss/sandbox

Peer Review

Overall, the topic you choose is very interesting and your contribution gave me more insight into this unknown topic to me. Some suggestions I can give revolves around providing more citations such as after "Aside form physical affects many also suffer from mental trauma after undergoing this tradition. Victims tend feel as if the procedure is "punishment" and often internalize blame and experience fear such as the fear of breastfeeding children in the future," and a few typos and grammar issues found throughout the draft. I suggest copying and pasting the draft into word or another website such as Grammarly to catch them. Overall, keep up the good work. I really like your topic and I am glad someone is providing more information on it. Tmaldona (talk) 06:53, 6 November 2018 (UTC)