User talk:Eekirk
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[edit]Hello, Eekirk, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:16, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
You have an overdue training assignment.
[edit]Please complete the assigned training modules. --TrudiJ (talk) 12:47, 27 September 2021 (UTC)
Respond to peer review
[edit]Hello I really appreciate the feedback you left for my wikipedia article and i think it was useful points too. The lead is very clear and explains the topic briefly but with enough detail to understand what it is about. I'd suggest taking the sentence about the Cartesian Other and making it into its own section with "extension" and mention it with a little less detail in the lead. : I Agree with this point and i myself was planning on doing something similar to what you have said Your content does to seem to have any bias or attempt to persuade anyone into believing one thing or another.
You also have good organization so far, starting with the background is probably the best idea.
Your article is really good so far, just add a few more sections, maybe more detail on what the Cartesian self meant for him and where he went from there.: thank you for this criticism i agree completely and youve helped me figure out the direction i'm trying to go in more so. JSlater2119 (talk) 22:52, 3 October 2021 (UTC)