User talk:Emmaantle/sandbox

Peer Review

I feel that the improvements you are planning to make to this article are very well though out. You have many references which relate to the article. I feel that having specific examples of different species who display this type of behaviour is a very good idea. I like that you are going to compare and contrast the structure of species of ants that do not display this behavior with ones that do. (br) I think that it would also be helpful if you explain how this behaviour differs (if it does) across the different species you were talking about. Maybe you could also add how this behaviour evolved.Erc045 (talk) 15:48, 21 October 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I appreciate the advice and will definitely incorporate these suggestions as I continue developing my article. Emmaantle (talk) 15:02, 23 October 2017 (UTC)