User talk:Ericmoreno.b
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[edit]Hello, Ericmoreno.b, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 21:16, 15 April 2020 (UTC)
Bjarke Ingels
[edit]Hi, I saw that you added material to this article. This article of of Good Article quality, which means that it's going to be harder to add content since it's seen as more complete than others and will be more heavily watched.
Looking at the content, this was written in a reflective, non-neutral tone as seems to be more of a reaction to the topic. It was also unsourced, which poses an issue and also exacerbates the issue of neutrality, as this can thus come across like we are making our own opinion and judgement of Ingels and his work. It's important to avoid using wording like ambitious, as this comes across like an opinion unless it's attributed to a specific person.
Also added was a tally of his projects - this is a bit problematic since this is going to be a dynamic list, meaning that it's always going to be added to and as such, can quickly become outdated. It also summarized content that is already discussed in the same section, which also posed an issue.
I think that the best option here would be to see if any of his latest projects have achieved notability and if so, if they are mentioned on the article. If not, then I would add just a 1-3 sentence synopsis of the project to the career section. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:09, 11 May 2020 (UTC)