User talk:FRANKLIN PANGBORN

Welcome!

Hello, FRANKLIN PANGBORN, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful:

• The five pillars of Wikipedia
• Tutorial
• How to edit a page and How to develop articles
• How to create your first article (using the Article Wizard if you wish)
• Manual of Style

I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on discussion pages using four tildes (~~~~); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place {{help me}} before the question. Again, welcome! - David Biddulph (talk) 17:51, 13 December 2011 (UTC)

Hints

Among the things which you'll need to do with your draft, the most important is to ensure that statements are verifiable by reference to reliable sources. As well the two links in the previous sentence, look also at WP:Referencing for beginners.

As a less important point, you will also need to tidy up the capitalisation of words. I wonder whether perhaps English is not your first language, but in English we do not make a habit of capitalising the first letter of nouns.

You have obviously done plenty of hard work so far, but the draft will need tidying up before it meets the standards for transfer to mainspace. You may find it uaeful to look at other, well-established articles, perhaps particularly biographies, to see how they are written and referenced. - David Biddulph (talk) 18:07, 13 December 2011 (UTC)