User talk:Gkn2018

December 2018

Hello, I'm ViperSnake151. Wikipedia is written by people who have a wide diversity of opinions, but we try hard to make sure articles have a neutral point of view. Your recent edit to Red Hydrogen One seemed less than neutral and has been removed. If you think this was a mistake, or if you have any questions, you can leave me a message on my talk page. It sounded like biased PR. ViperSnake151 Talk 23:13, 17 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

No, there were problems. It sounded like you were trying to give it blatantly positive PR spin with quotes and other advertising-like language (including celebrity testimonials). It adds nothing to the article but puffery. ViperSnake151 Talk 00:30, 18 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It's about tone, properly cited facts and opinions, and neutrality. We have examples, such as HTC One (M7) (which I worked on), on how we can address all relevant details fairly. ViperSnake151 Talk 23:49, 31 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]