User talk:Hallekerickson
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[edit]Hello, Hallekerickson, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:19, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hi Halle!
I really enjoyed reading your wiki article on glassybaby. First I was wondering if the company name is all lowercase or if that was a mistake, I couldn’t tell. I also thought that it would be a good idea to include a little more history (assuming there’s info on the story) on how the company started and what inspired it. Also worth including the name of the founder. Maybe it could be a good idea to include an info box on the side that had some pictures of the product/ hot shops, and the name of the founder, date founded, etc. Some more stats on how many products they’ve sold would also be interesting.
Elasezgin (talk) 21:22, 26 January 2023 (UTC)
- Hi Ela! Thank you so much for your peer review! Those are really helpful and I will get working on incorporating your ideas (I love the idea of a side info box that summarizes key points/stats/etc), as well as making sure I cover up ends on history that the original doesn't include. and yes haha glassybaby company name is all lowercase, maybe I'll make a note of that so other wiki editors/readers know that too. thanks so much!
- Hallekerickson (talk) 21:30, 2 February 2023 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hey! Let me know if you can't find my peer review or if you have any questions about what I wrote. Mhdav9 (talk) 05:26, 27 January 2023 (UTC)
- Thanks for your peer review! I was able to find it, thank you for checking! I appreciate your points and will get to work on incorporating more on the creation process so the price points can be more clear/comprehensible to readers. I am going to add some photos as well-I think I'm going to take some myself of glassybaby as I have one, and will search for photos of hotshops and stores that I can use/have the rights to use as well. thank you so much for your feedback, it is really helpful!
- Hallekerickson (talk) 21:33, 2 February 2023 (UTC)