User talk:Hshin025

Welcome![edit]

Hello, Hshin025, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:47, 21 January 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Notes[edit]

I have some notes for you:

This needs editing to fit Wikipedia's writing style. At present it's more casual and conversational, as well as has a non-neutral tone.

Avoid using point of view or subjective statements. You should also avoid "if... then..." type of statements where we say that because the artist does or has X or Y, that she does this or that.

You use euphemisms to refer to the artist dying - we have to avoid those on Wikipedia.

This needs in-line citations.

The writing is really jumbled, as it jumps from several different time periods. It needs to be more streamlined. I'll try to help some with this, but it's important to set things up in structured sections.

I've done some cleanup and restructuring - the main thing right now is the sourcing. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:03, 19 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

March 2020[edit]

Thank you for your contributions. Please mark your edits, such as your recent edits to Amelia Cornelius, as "minor" only if they are minor edits. In accordance with Help:Minor edit, a minor edit is one that the editor believes requires no review and could never be the subject of a dispute. Minor edits consist of things such as typographical corrections, formatting changes or rearrangement of text without modification of content. Additionally, the reversion of clear-cut vandalism and test edits may be labeled "minor". Thank you. Schazjmd (talk) 13:43, 11 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]