User talk:JCo0197
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Test JCo0197 (talk) 19:01, 2 September 2021 (UTC)Julia
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:34, 17 September 2021 (UTC)
WCI Peer Review[edit]
The lead paragraph is great. It briefly explains what exposure therapy means and what that is used for. The paragraph ends with telling the readers that this method has been proven useful by many studies. I believe the writer was successful in making the article neutral. The writer backs up each of their paragraphs with the explanation of the study which proves it. Also, the writer does not include any personal suggestions or opinions. Everything included in the article is based on evidences. The history of exposure therapy and the techniques has also been included. One thing the writer could consider adding is the downside of this therapy, if there is any. But overall, the article is really good and engaging. Aanto2003 (talk) 20:34, 29 September 2021 (UTC)
Peer review response[edit]
- Hi! Thank you so much for your response. I'm so glad to hear that everything looks good to you -- your response inspired me to keep plugging away, especially on that dance research.
- I'm so happy you checked out the videos also. Aren't those fun? It's such a cool and unique style.
- I recommend checking out some Cajun music too if you're into this. It's similar in many ways (accordion-based, bouncy, syncopated, catchy) but with more of an old Acadian/French influence. This is a Cajun tune that I keep coming back to for some reason. This guy plays it pretty amazingly too. Just such a raucous sound. And just so fun to watch those pallets move when he hits the buttons!
- I should put this video on the sandbox also. Really great zydeco. Skip to 1:05. This kid is seven years old!
- Thank you so much for taking the time to read through this sandbox and leave your review. It helps so much to know that the project is moving in the right direction. Your feedback made my day!