User talk:JackTheBestBoss/Japanese destroyer Momo (1944)
Notes
[edit]Put down more clickable words(links) -change all caps spelling of ships. -special lettering and slatted word for ship names, primarily Momo. -Possibly add whole new section for Fate, fate of Momo is relatively "long" -make specifications bar(don't know how) -insert source numbers -correct terminology for certain ships(not sure if I got them all right -see if how I wrote dates and time correct the way you should on Wikipedia -who torpedoed the Isuzu JackTheBestBoss (talk) 04:16, 21 February 2019 (UTC)
Everyones thoughts, notes, and chat
[edit]@JackTheBestBoss: G'day, Jack, nice work so far. From here I have a few suggestions: consider adding an infobox in the lead. {{Infobox ship}} would be the most appropriate here. You can see an example here: Japanese destroyer Matsu (1944). Additionally, each paragraph should ideally end with an in line citation. This could be to a book (with the relevant page number being cited), or to a journal article, newspaper article, and website. Be careful, though, to make sure these meet the definition of a reliable source. You can find some guidance on how to add in line citations (i.e. the mark up coding) here: Help:Footnotes. When you feel your article is ready to be published (moved to mainspace), I'd suggest posting a note at WT:MILHIST again for assistance with moving it. Finally, please be careful to ensure that you are not copying any sources verbatim, as this constitutes a copyright violation and can result in articles being deleted. Anyway, good luck with your article and thanks for your efforts so far. Regards, AustralianRupert (talk) 09:13, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
@AustralianRupert: Thank you, the page looks much better and cleaned up, I appreciate it. I am currently going through the wikipedia training articles and the ship box one. I'll take your advice on source verbatim, as well as your other ones, as I did make this mistake on copyright, so I will change it. I will post another note on Milhist for assitiance soon. Anyways, thanks for the help, much appreciated, I can not stress this more. JackTheBestBoss (talk) 18:37, 23 February 2019 (UTC)