User talk:Jamienicole1/sandbox
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I notice you have one source, so I am hoping you will research others to give you a different perspective and a variety of points of view (Norobello (talk) 12:50, 3 April 2017 (UTC)). I notice that you use he said and he claimed a lot, I would try to refrain from this. This would establish a better credibility. I would also try to find more information about his current life and possible of his friends. Ahlanarenee (talk) 12:13, 5 April 2017 (UTC)