User talk:Jblockychop/Lipid pump

Hello friends

Laura Vary's Peer Review

Hi group, great job so far! I think the writing flow is great - it definitely seems like one person wrote this entire article, so the flow is wonderful. My first recommendation is to double-check consistency of grammar and sentence structure: make sure capitalizations are all consistent and proper, and make the location of the citations consistent because some are one space after the last word while others are directly after the last word of the sentence. My second recommendation is to maybe move the "Regional Differences" section to before the "Ecological Impacts" section, unless the regional differences will focus primarily on differences ecological impacts and differences in climate change impacts across regions. As it stands now, for me, it felt like it was a little out of place at the very end of the article. Lingcod8 (talk) 00:18, 16 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review 2!

I am linking my peer review here. Overall, great job! The article was well-written and cohesive, and I feel like I learned a lot about the lipid pump! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jblockychop/Lipid_pump/Laurelceleste22_Peer_Review Laurelceleste22 (talk) 00:55, 17 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi all, I submitted my peer review. Here is the link. Overall, great job! https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jblockychop/Lipid_pump/Meyergr_Peer_Review Meyergr (talk) 16:53, 17 November 2021 (UTC)Grace[reply]

Malik Review

Hey guys! Overall you've done some great work, there was only one minor update I suggested making.

Best, Malik Jordan — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jordamal (talk • contribs) 01:43, 24 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]