User talk:Julievaron

Managing a conflict of interest

Hello, Julievaron. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Sean Kanan, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Spike Wilbury (talk) 16:53, 16 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, there are a couple of issues. First of all the tone needs to be encyclopedic and not promotional (i.e. "Sean proved himself a 'triple threat'" is language that might go in a pop culture magazine but not an encyclopedia) and second, you just kind of pasted it into the top of the lead and not into the typical article structure that we use here. If you want you could paste his text into the talk page and a volunteer can help you work it into the article in a correct way. --Spike Wilbury (talk) 00:31, 20 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]