User talk:Knmiller1997
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Article Selection Round 1[edit]
Article 1: Mommy Track
Expanding:
Topic Requirements:
- This topic has to do with women making motherhood their number 1 priority
Scope of Work Requirements:
- I wish to discuss this in further detail regarding oppression of women who decide to take this route as well as how women can fight the stereotype that every women must pursue motherhood
Reliable Source:
Article 2: Prolonged Labor
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Topic Requirements:
- This article briefly defines what prolonged labor is--relates to medicine and has to do with child birth
Scope of Work Requirements:
- I wish to go into detail regarding why prolonged labor occurs, the dangers of it, the proper way to handle it, and how it is approached in different realms of healthcare
Reliable Source:
Article 3: Margarete Mitscherlich-Nielsen
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Topic Requirements:
- This article describes a female psychologist in post WWII who approaches German guilt as well as the sexuality of females at the time--relates to feminism
- Relates to female oppression and women in STEM given that the information provided about her is very poorly presented
Scope of Work Requirements:
- I wish to incorporate a more accurate depiction of her work and theories, as well as include more reliable sources
Reliable Source:
- https://www.independent.co.uk/news/obituaries/margarete-mitscherlich-psychoanalyst-who-dealt-with-german-post-war-guilt-7857154.html
- Will include information from her publication: The Peaceable Sex
Welcome![edit]
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Peer Review (Beth Strutz)[edit]
The organization of your draft seems to be very logically organized, and the lead section feels like it covers the scope of the article really well. Obviously more information still needs to be added, but the current outline seems very interesting and clearly presented. It seems like it would be helpful to readers (particularly to laypeople) to add lots of hyperlinks for more specialized terms, so other relevant Wikipedia articles could be easily accessed (ie: cephalopelvic disproportion). Mostly, though, the addition of more detailed info for all the various complications and symptoms should really help this article go above and beyond. This seems like it will be a really interesting article once it's complete. Your current working outline with bullet-points is a really good idea, and I might use a similar method to lay out the framework for my own article. Good work so far! Bethstrutz (talk) 22:54, 12 November 2018 (UTC)
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