User talk:Krlhdc
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[edit]Hello, Krlhdc, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Adam and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:23, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review Kelsey Luebbert
[edit]Hello Sean, I think your article is off to a really good start! It seems to have a good foundation, and the lead did draw me in and made me want to read more of the article and education myself on Annie Fisher. One thing i would have to say would be the "Entrepreneurship" section seems to be a little lacking. It is relatively short compared to the rest of the sections. The case may be that there isn't alot of information to go in this section, and in that case i think you should maybe add those two sentences to another section, perhaps the "Cooking and Catering business" section. Another suggestion i have would be to further explain the "beaten biscuits." It is one of the first things you mention in the article, so maybe adding an explanation of what those are in the "cooking and catering business" section would be helpful, although their is a link to the recipe, i think the actual article itself would benefit from some explanation. I think you have a good amount of refrences and most of your statements connect to sources, and they all seem to lead to relevant and reliable sources. Your content seems very neutral in most places, it may lean towards the more positive sides in some sections, but i think that that works for this particular article. Lastly, i think that the "personal life" section could come after the "early life" section, just because those two seem to tie together and flow together more. In some of your sections i made minor changes to sentence structure, because you had a few run on sentences or some that just seemed a bit too long. Overall, i think you have a great start! Keep up the good work. Kelsey Krlhdc (talk) 17:06, 4 October 2016 (UTC)
Feedback request
[edit]I got your message and took a look at your article. I moved it to Sacred Sun (you had moved it to the Wikipedia namespace instead of the article namespace) and did some copy-edits. It's a really nice start, but I find myself wondering what became of her. Did she remain in Europe until she died, or was she ever able to return home?
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Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:25, 22 October 2016 (UTC)
An empty article? Suggestion
[edit]Hi! I found Black Bird (Washingsabba) empty and abandoned. If you wish someone would delete it, you should place {{db-g7}} at the top. If you wish to write the article further, please place {{Under construction}} at the top instead, to avoid the article being nominated for speedy deletion. If you need any help whatsoever, feel free to contact me, or place your question as described in {{help me}}, and someone will be along to answer it shortly 
. Ivi104 (talk) 18:20, 29 November 2016 (UTC)