User talk:Mark Arnheim

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Regarding the draft on Bentleigh Junior Football Club

I've made a few small changes and I have some feedback for you:

I've skimmed through the article, but I'm not sure where this football club is. Please change the first sentence to read The Bentleigh Junior Football Club is a member of the XYZ League, in the city of CityName, CountryName.
Find references online/offline that talk about this club and add them to the draft. See WP:GNG for more details. This is the most important step. Finish this before you move on to other suggestions.
Add a few more wikilinks in the draft (maybe for some of the players)
Create a new section called "History", and move all relevant prose about the history of the club there.

Reply back here when you've done these and we can take it from there -MPGuy2824 (talk) 10:04, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]