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Hi, MercurySol122. Welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Our intro page contains a lot of helpful material for new users—please check it out! If you need help, visit Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask a question on your talk page. Jimfbleak - talk to me? 06:52, 31 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Thank you for providing a COI disclosure. As I indicated before, that doesn't mean that you can write what you like, it just stops you being blocked immediately. I've restored the article as a cleaned-up version, you shouldn't re-add any of the deleted material. As I said, any non-trivial edits should be suggested on the talk page. You should not consider adding obvious promotional material, such as award, presenting opinions as fact eg Yext helps businesses, rather than "Yext claims to...

Too many of the sources appear to be associated with the company. That's OK with the figures, but the list of investors would be better sourced to their websites rather than your own, and some of the other sources seem to be press releases or interviews rather than independent analyses.

As I indicated before, there appear to have been undeclared paid editors involved with this article before. Your company should be aware that I will block any accounts that are non-transparent about a likely COI.

Cheers, Jimfbleak - talk to me? 07:05, 31 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]