User talk:Mhopkins32
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Article Review
[edit]I visited the International Olympic Committee page on Wikipedia, and found three aspects of it worth commenting on: lack of citations, grammar and it needs to be updated.
Citations
[edit]I noticed in this article that the citations need to be updated so that they are reliable. It is more difficult telling which sources are in favor of supporting this website and ones that aren't. This article needs more sources included and and they need to be updated so they are reliable.
Grammer
[edit]Throughout this article there are a lot of vague descriptions being used, which are resulting in nonfactual claims. This article needs more reliable sources included, and deeper description.
Update
[edit]This article has not been updated since September 2016, it could be updated with new information. The more up to date the article is the more reliable it becomes.
Summary
[edit]This article was about the International Olympic Committee, this is overall a good article it just needs more reliable sources and needs to be updated to make the article even stronger. The article's grammar needs to be improved there are vague descriptions. Mhopkins32 (talk) 07:07, 28 January 2017 (UTC)