User talk:NUBioStudent
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 14:43, 16 March 2018 (UTC)
—— Good job finding and accumulating all your information! It really seems like a comprehensive article. -Tone is neutral and professional. -sources seem good, just quickly looking through they seem trustworthy. - I'm probably just dumb but I didn't realize it was a freshwater organism until the habitat section. Could you sneak in the word freshwater somewhere earlier? -Do you have a source for "second largest crayfish genus"? - I don't know why but "Though varied across species, two terminal elements that make up the form I gonopod of male Cambarus form ninety degree angles with the central appendage, allowing for their identification." is somehow confusing to me. Maybe I don't know the term form I gonopod, or maybe the sentence structure is the thing confusing me. -can you also fix the top part where it describes the size range so that the units are consistent? I realize that you probably didn't edit this part but it might be something you'd like to do.
Can't find too much fault!