User talk:Nrs53

Welcome to Wikipedia from MTHarden[edit]

Hi, Nrs53. I welcome you to Wikipedia! Thank you for all of your edits. I hope you like editing here and being part of Wikipedia! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~~~~); when you save the page, this will turn into your name and the date. If you need help, check out Wikipedia:Questions, ask me on my talk page, or put {{helpme}} (and what you need help with) on your talk page and someone will show up very soon to answer your questions. Again, welcome! MTHarden (talk) 17:03, 29 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello Message From Roach17[edit]

Hi, Nrs53. My name is angie. As i read your bio the part about disappointing others and yourself if you chose not to go to school stuck out to me. I feel the same way. I want to do the right thing in life and its good to know that other people feel the same way. I hope you have a good weekend. Roach17 (talk) 15:16, 11 September 2011 (UTC)Roach17[reply]

Week 3[edit]

I did not see your critique of a Wikipedia article that was your assignment for Week 3. This is the first assignment to be worth a real amount of points. If you did in fact complete the assignment please let me know where I can see your work. If you do not know how to complete the assignment you need to seek help. Talk to a classmate, contact an online ambassador, or contact me during office hours. There is still time to recover, but you should avoid missing more assignments. --MTHarden (talk) 03:05, 20 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Well I found your article linked from your user page, you left a review, but your signature looks wrong. Your review was not particularly helpful though as it seemed to be directed more to people with this condition as opposed to advice for future editors. Moodle. --MTHarden (talk) 14:54, 23 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6[edit]

Hi, it's Sandra Sanchez. The article on Color preferences is ready for review, under Children's color preferences. Thank you for reading. Sanwish (talk) 17:38, 4 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Week 6 peer review[edit]

I had already put a peer review on the actual page of mental disorientation, but I did it wrong I was supposed to put it under your discussion page. Here it is: The first sentence can be changed to,'as well as in the elderly and ill.' The second sentence seems like it's a run-on sentence. After it says 'dehydrated or hungry or possibly' can be changed with punctuation. The third sentence looks good, also the sentences are plagiarism free. --Karina Quintanar (talk) 02:00, 10 October 2011 (UTC)[reply]