User talk:Oliviawlam

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Hello, Oliviawlam, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:33, 13 February 2018 (UTC)

NS1150 article choice

Hi Oliviawlam, Based on your article choices I will assign "Whole30" as I see there is probably quite a lot of room to offer information. You will need to be careful and following the medical editing guidelines as listed in the tutorial for Wikipedia, other than that I think this is a good choice! Let me know if you have questions. Saguaromelee (talk) 15:55, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Feedback for annotated bibliography

Hello! Really interesting topic! I expect you won't find many high-quality scientific studies that explore the Whole30 diet directly, so you may want to try search terms like "fad diet*" or "high-protein diet*" to search the literature. Right now your sources explore the effects of dietary sugars and processed foods on health more broadly, so see if you can employ some tools from the tutorial to identify some systematic reviews or empirical studies on popular diets and their effectiveness. Let me know if you have any questions! Saguaromelee (talk) 19:07, 11 April 2018 (UTC)