Hi there. :-)
Thanks for your message on my talk page. From a glance at KarlBattery's editing history, it looks like he's a recent arrival too, it's the only article he's edited. So I'm anxious not to go in all guns blazing and put him off. But yes I do tend to agree with your view. I thought it could do with a third person getting involved, so I went and made my edit, which he then reverted a lot of. Let's continue politely making edits and explaining the rationale for them on the talk page, and if he or anyone else wants to get some mediation we/they can always put a "request for comment" on there and see if that triggers someone else to give an opinion.