User talk:Risalmon

This user is a student editor in Soka_University_of_America/WRIT101-02_(Fall_2019) .

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Hello, Risalmon, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:09, 4 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Article Feedback[edit]

This article has a lot of information within it, therefore the break up of sections is really important. I think that the organization of the article is good and does a good job organizing all of the information. I think more pictures or graphs for the article would help drive the point of the article more. I think the benefits and drawbacks of using this method should be described in the lead. The lead introduces the subsections within the article, but does not describe the importance of reuse of excreta. I think the flow of the article is good, but towards the end of the article, the order and inclusion of information lacks a bit. Maofukada (talk) 00:50, 20 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]