User talk:Rojasandrea
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[edit]Hello, Rojasandrea, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Brianda and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 22:42, 1 March 2023 (UTC)
Rocío Maldonado feedback
[edit]Hi @Rojasandrea, Thanks for your work in expanding the Rocio Madonado article! I have feedback for some edits to significiantly improve the article. I think you can get those done quickly.
Lead section: Check out the lead sections on María Izquierdo and Norma Bessouet. A Wikipedia article is supposed to start with a lead section that summarizes all the major points of the article. It should generally open with something like Article title is... and go on to succinctly say what the topic is in the opening sentence.
Also the verb tense in your article is all over the place. In the biography section you started with past tense, which is good. In the Education section you write:
- "she is enrolled", "She then moves", "Maldonado still craves and seeks"
So keep it all in the past tense to be consistent and for the text to flow better. This will greatly improve the article.
If you have any questions please let me know. Again good job! Brianda (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:25, 10 May 2023 (UTC)