User talk:Rona1964/Biblionef
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[edit]I made these edits, partly formatting, MoSand copyediting, but mostly removing the blatant and sometimes first-person spamming. Please do not restore the promotional text.
The article needs more wikilinks. I've added a couple, braille and Cape Town, but there is plenty of scope for more.
In places, the text seems a close paraphrase of copyrighted sources, some rewording might help