User talk:Sader94
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:28, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
Mmacmillan1's Peer Review for Hydropower in Canada
[edit]I am assuming that you would still like to add an Hydropower in Canada section to the Hydropower article. I would suggest adding on to the Hydroelectricity in Canada article instead. Here you can expand on the electrical generation side of hydropower as well as discuss the ecological and environmental impacts of this power source.
The lead is well done. It is interesting to begin with the history and first use of hydroelectricity in Canada. The content is neutral overall, which is good. I would suggest further expanding on electrical power generation, by looking into how each province/territory in Canada manages this source of energy. Give examples of current and future hydropower projects in each province. Furthermore, you can look into government policies (if any) concerning this energy and maybe touch on how people perceive hydropower in Canada. Then, as stated earlier, you can discuss the environmental and ecological impacts of dams.
This section will be a great addition to the article. The content that you have so far is a good start.