User talk:SaniyaSayed4
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:49, 19 September 2019 (UTC)
Peer Review Comments
[edit]To start off, your lead is very well written! You could consider linking Citrus aurantium to the ‘bitter orange’ wiki page. Your lead could also highlight important parts about its pathogenicity and treatments, as the lead should reflect the most important information and give a good overview of the rest of the article. You could link ‘thrombus’ to the ‘thrombus’ Wiki article. I like how you explained what Mucormycosis is, what angiogenesis is, what tissue necrosis is, etc. following their introductions. It makes following your article much easier. Under Pathogenicity, what is CotH protein? You could write out its full name then put CotH in brackets. You could consider linking neutropenia to the ‘neutropenia’ wiki article. If possible, you could expand on the case of neutropenic patient - What were their symptoms, what tests were used to identify the infection, etc. This article 'Firebrats, Thermobia domestica, aggregate in response to the microbes Enterobacter cloacae and Mycotypha microspora' (Woodbury 2013)could be a possible source for you to reference. The article states Mycotypha microspora arrests firebrats from aggregating, which gives some insight on their habitats your fungus may like; It also indicates a symbiotic relationship as well, which could be some quality content. This article 'Horizontal transmission of the microbial symbionts Enterobacter cloacae and Mycotypha microspora to their firebrat host' (Woodbury 2013) could also be one for you to reference. It provides insight on a relationship b/w firebrat and M. microspora; There is also more info about M. Microsporangia growing on faeces that you could incorporate under Habitat. There is a decent balance in the different sources being cited! I also like how you're discussing from a neutral POV, as you're not trying to persuade any ideas on anyone.Kikikhoun (talk) 17:27, 30 October 2019 (UTC)