User talk:SharonYubinKang
This user is a student editor in University_of_California_Irvine/International_Communication_2020_(Spring_2020) . |
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[edit]Hello, SharonYubinKang, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:50, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
Nix v. Hedden draft
[edit]Hi Sharon! Thanks for your interest in editing Wikipedia, and I look forward to your edits on Nix v. Hedden. I had to revert your recent page move because it accidentally removed the article from where other readers can find it, but I placed a copy of the article on one of your subpages at User:SharonYubinKang/Nix v. Hedden/Article copy. As always, we invite you to be bold, so don't be afraid to make edits directly to articles! I'm excited for your edits, and let me know if you have any questions or need any help. — Wug·a·po·des 20:07, 21 April 2020 (UTC)
A barnstar for you!
[edit]The Original Barnstar | |
The article has expounded TikTok's history and its corporate relations over time. It has also outlined a clear path of the company's development. Achieving that gives the readers a perspective of what the company is and an understanding of where it came from. It technicalities and failures overtime are also another aspect that the article managed to capture successfully. However, there seemed to be a bit of bias when the author spoke about the company's low points. The tone would lead the reader to think that the author has a personal stake in this whole ordeal. therefore, i would suggest an adjustment of the adjectives to sound as neutral as possible. In my reports i would wish to incorporate the preciseness of this author. Itsrufuswang (talk) 11:50, 9 May 2020 (UTC) |