User talk:Shouston1220
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[edit]Hello, Shouston1220, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 15:24, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
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[edit]Article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Advancing_Human_Rights
This article is relevant to the article title and is also related to the article I have chosen to edit for the Wikipedia project regarding human rights.However, it could provide more information explaining what the Advancing Human Rights (AHR) does and how they differ from other human rights organizations. As well, it could provide more information surrounding what the AHR does in order to help protect online human rights and how they conduct the research they do. How much research do they conduct and how often? How many individuals do the research? This article does not appear to be biased in any way, nor does any viewpoints seem to be over-represented, but rather underrepresented. " In June 2014, Dissident Squared was supported by members of Congress in their campaign to rename the street in front of the Chinese embassy "Liu Xiaobo Plaza." This statement could further be explained as it does not reveal much detail into why and how this incident happened. All of the reference links work properly and are all related to the article. The citations are neutral and none of the references are biased towards a certain idea. Although, the very first reference link is in Chinese, therefore it isn't fully reliable to someone who can't speak that language. It would be helpful if there were an option to view the webpage in English in order to get more information and to see where exactly the information is coming from. Most of the references used are from 2013-2014 so they could use a little updating. Furthermore, this article is related to the WikiProject I am doing because it discusses important human rights and information that should be available for everyone, as well as certain support programs put in place to protect individuals that feel threatened. This article as well claims that the organization AHR focuses on freedom of speech, women’s rights and promoting the freedoms of all individuals, especially those who go unheard. These rights are outlined in the Universal Declaration of Human Rights which is directly related to the article I am editing on Children's Rights.
Shouston1220 (talk) 01:49, 26 January 2018 (UTC)Skye Houston