User talk:Steffihelene/sandbox
Comentarios segundo borrador[edit]
¡Buen trabajo, Steffi! Por supuesto, quedan unos asuntos por arreglar aún, así que aquí van mis comentarios, en orden según su lugar en el texto.
Introducción[edit]
- influenced by Rioplatense Spanish (correct?) <-- yes
- of which they share common characteristics <-- Sugiero que lo reescribas para que fluya mejor.
- *not sure what to link for 2, 3, and 4* <-- Wikipedia should create the index for you based on the headings in your article, so don't worry about it for the moment.
Main Characteristics[edit]
- identical to the River Plate <-- stick with one name for this dialect, either Rioplatense or River Plate. Also, in English I'd say "identical to Rioplatense Spanish", without the article and with the language name.
- the substitution of the personal pronouns lo and la for le in the position <-- In English this reads backwards. Leísmo es cuando alguien utiliza le en contextos de complemento directo (=direct object) en lugar de los pronombres lo y la.
- More leisurely = slower? with more pauses?
- inherited from Guaraní, slang = Guarani, Lunfardo, and other... <-- Lunfardo es un nombre propio.
- postalveolar deaf affricate = postalveolar voiceless affricate
- Assimilation of the "r" = Assibilation
- The final word /n/ = Word-final /n/
- Non-Aspirated realization of /x/ = Non-aspirated realization of /x/.
- Conservation of the hiatus. (?) = Hiatus (linguistics) conservation
- Hard and flexible vocalism. <-- No estoy del todo seguro qué quiere decir el autor original aquí, pero puede ser algo como "Stable vowel system"
- Weak articulation of /b/, /d/, and /g/ in intervocalic position (including initial). = Weak articulation of /b/, /d/, and /g/ in intervocalic position (and even initial position).
Similarities with...[edit]
- creating a variety(?) of northeastern Argentina (maybe instead of variety...wide range? "creating a wide range of northeastern Argentinian...) very similar to the Paraguayan Spanish in the provinces already mentioned. <-- 'Variety' is fine here. Yo diría: "...the respective dialects fuse, creating a northeastern Argentine variety very similar to Paraguayan Spanish...".
- "Voseo is the oldest form of Castilian Spanish" (direct quote from another Wikipedia page). <-- No estoy seguro cuál es la mejor manera de citar esta otra página de Wikipedia, pero seguramente es algo que podemos averiguar.