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[edit]I'm editing the following article about Hawaiian pizza - Wikipedia:
My Proposed edit is to update the opening sentence for neutrality. here's the opening sentence: Hawaiian pizza is a pizza originating in Canada and is traditionally topped with pineapple, tomato sauce, cheese, and either ham or bacon.
I'd like to revise on Hawaiian pizza toping's. Hawaiian toppings can include anything along as it has pineapple, tomato sauce, and cheese , are the main ingredients to make Hawaiian pizza. and after that you could have anything on it.
What do you think?