User talk:Twofingered Typist/Archives/2016/January
Hi there! This article's on my watchlist so I've been idly noticing your changes, and I really appreciate the thorough going-over you're giving it. Thank you!
Per the notice I won't touch the page for now, but I wanted to let you know that there's a typo - 'certifid' instead of 'certified.' Would you like me to change it? I'd be happy to! And once more, thanks! NekoKatsun (talk) 19:25, 26 January 2016 (UTC)
Liz Sanbourne Clarification[edit]
Thank you for your help and I apologize for all the confusion. I tried to convey all the information in as concise language as possible and it just ended up being very confusing. Here is a revise version of the first sentence that hopefully clears up the meaning:
"Along with Brian, and their friend Doc, Liz becomes close with the amnesiac Sheridan and helps her to try to remember her past. Sheridan, who believes her name is Diana, forms a romantic relationship with Brian. Liz grows increasingly jealous of the attention Brian pays to Diana and suspicious of Brian’s true identity.”
As for the second question, it would probably make more sense if I broke it up into multiple sentences.
"Everyone incorrectly assumes that Eve's child with Julian is Chad; Whitney's relationship with Chad is believed to be incestuous as they would be half-siblings. Ashamed of committing incest by having sex with Chad, Whitney turns against her mother for not telling her the truth about her past earlier."
I apologize again for the confusion. Let me know if there are any other questions or if these two plot points need more clarification. Best, Aoba47 (talk) 17:24, 31 January 2016 (UTC)