User talk:Valeriesophie

Welcome[edit]

Hello Valerie, welcome to the Wikipedia workshop on Be Bold. Greetz, Dick Bos (talk) 14:24, 6 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome to Wikipedia! Romaine (talk) 14:41, 6 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Valerie. Please allow me to make some general remarks about what you have put in your sandbox until now:

A very interesting attempt! Looks like this has good perspectives, from the Wiki-point of view.....
In fact you do two (more or less) separated things:
- about the history of the sharing economy - this is a good paragraph. To my humble opinion it is better than the existing paragraph in the Wikipedia article on sharing economy, so perhaps it can be integrated here.
- about acco sharing: the introductory paragraph and the paragraphs on airbnb &c, on the critics, and with the overview. Perhaps this paragraphs can be taken together to form a new paragraph in the existing article on sharing economy.
There still is something wrong with the references. See: Help:Referencing_for_beginners. (there are hundreds of help pages for all kinds of things on Wikipedia; the problem is to find your way in all these pages.....)

It is a pity that I can't be in your class next Friday. Good luck with the job! --Dick Bos (talk) 19:32, 24 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]