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Hello, Vishiz, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited was Ridhhaan Jaiin, which appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

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A tag has been placed on Ridhhaan Jaiin requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section A7 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the article appears to be about a real person or group of people that does not credibly indicate how or why the subject is important or significant: that is, why an article about that subject should be included in an encyclopedia. Under the criteria for speedy deletion, such articles may be deleted at any time. Please read more about what is generally accepted as notable.

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Hi Moonswimmer, I have drafted again with appropriate citations. I would like you to help me review and confirm there are no violations before publishing the page.
Request you to help and oblige. Vishiz (talk) 05:50, 20 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Since you at least know him, you have an obvious conflict of interest, please don't write about yourself, your friends or relatives and read the guidance below:

  • When you write about a person, you must provide independent verifiable sources to enable us to verify the facts and show that they meet the notability guidelines. Sources that are not acceptable include those linked to the person or an associated organisation, press releases, YouTube, IMDB, social media and other sites that can be self-edited, blogs, websites of unknown or non-reliable provenance, and sites that are just reporting what the person claims or interviewing them. Note that references should be in-line so we can tell what fact each is supporting, and should not be bare urls.
  • Some of your sources are OK, like the book of records, but others include sources that are just repeating that, like Pune Pulse, and his own publications which obviously aren't independent. Publications shouldn't have references any way
  • You must write in a non-promotional tone. Articles must be neutral and encyclopaedic, with verifiable facts, not opinions or reviews.
  • Like garnered attention for its unique narrative style, compelling storytelling... he has continued to captivate readers with a series of thought-provoking works... His writing style, characterized by creative, simple and easy to connect with young audience, has earned him acclaim within the literary community... His ability to seamlessly weave intricate plots with rich character development has set him apart as a literary luminary. and so on, just fan page stuff.
  • There shouldn't be any url links in the article, only in the "References" or "External links" sections.
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  • You have no wikilinks, like audiobook, podcaster, Liverpool or Pune

Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. If you are writing about yourself, or someone you know as a friend, colleague, client, employer or relative, you have a conflict of interest, and you must disclose the nature of that COI.

Jimfbleak - talk to me? 09:21, 22 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello @Jimfbleak,
Thanks for the detailed feedback which helped me understand all the issues.
I have redrafted entire article again as below, and will add wikilinks, references etc in final draft after you confirm it is okay. Reference to sources, Pune Pulse and other media are all independent news channels/websites in Pune. The only own publication mentioned by you is the ISBNs of the book written by him. Please review and let me know if this is okay to proceed.
Additionally, he is not someone who I know as friend, college, client, employer or relative. I met this boy in my son's school where he visited to give a speech. After being impressed I thought of writing this for spreading awareness.
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Draft:
Ridhhaan Jaiin, born on October 7, 2013, is an individual from Pune, India, engaged in various pursuits such as authorship, audiobook narration, entrepreneurship, motivational speaking, coaching, and podcasting. Originally born in Liverpool, UK, he moved to Pune a few months after birth.
Literary Career:
Ridhhaan's literary journey began at the age of six, and in 2023, he achieved recognition by setting records in the India Book of Records and Asia Book of Records.
Author:
Ridhhaan's foray into writing began with "Once Upon In My Mind," a moral story-themed piece that gained attention for its unique narrative style and the author's age. He continued to write works exploring themes of moral stories and horror comedy. His writing style, described as simple and easily relatable to a young audience, has garnered attention within the literary community.
Notable works by Ridhhaan Jaiin include "The Mirror and The Greedy Man," "The Despicable Virus," and "Penny and the Monsters," showcasing his versatility as a writer.
Audiobook Narrator:
At the age of 8, Ridhhaan showcased his versatility as an audiobook narrator, personally narrating and releasing audiobooks for his works. His narration aimed to bring his literary creations to audiences worldwide.
Entrepreneurship:
Venturing into entrepreneurship, Ridhhaan initiated the "Once Upon In Our Minds" international story writing competition for children aged five to sixteen. The competition's first season resulted in eight winners, and their stories were compiled and published in the book "Once Upon In Our Minds" under his venture RidhzWorld Publishing.
Speaker:
Recognized as one of the youngest authors in India, Ridhhaan received invitations from schools to engage with children. These invitations led to interactive sessions where he shared insights into his journey as an author, discussed the nuances of story writing and book publishing, and conducted motivational exercises.
In 2023, Ridhhaan participated as a speaker at the Pune International Literary Festival (PILF) alongside other presenters.
Philanthropy:
Allocating a portion of his audiobook earnings, Ridhhaan supports blind students and the BVJSS Foundation, an orphanage accommodating 350 children in Pune. His philanthropic efforts extend beyond financial contributions; he consistently visits the orphanage, engaging with the children and encouraging them to build confidence, speak assertively, and craft their own stories. For his dedication to these young individuals, Ridhhaan has been honored with the title of Brand Ambassador for the BVJSS Foundation.
Recognition:
In 2023, Ridhhaan Jaiin set records in the India Book of Records and Asia Book of Records, including the youngest motivational speaker and coach, the maximum number of storybooks authored and launched in one year by a child, and the youngest audiobook narrator. These records acknowledge his achievements in various literary and motivational pursuits.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Vishiz (talk) 16:26, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]
A draft without references is meaningless, since they are needed to establish notability. Also, you text is full of your opinions, like His writing style, described as simple and easily relatable to a young audience, has garnered attention within the literary community... and showcasing his versatility as a writer. when we need real facts Jimfbleak - talk to me? 17:03, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]