User talk:Willclisham
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[edit]Hello, Willclisham, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:44, 14 January 2016 (UTC)
Hello!
[edit]Hi William!
My name is Janna (from Autopsy class) and I'm just introducing myself on your talk page! I hope all this Wikipedia stuff isn't giving you a hard time. I'm not sure if I'm doing this right. It seems kind of confusing but I'll get the hang of it! I read your intro post on D2L and love that you include your dog as an important part of your family. I agree that most people in our culture include pets as members of the family. I'm in school to be a Veterinary Technologist so it makes me heart happy when I meet fellow animal lovers! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Maymers7 (talk • contribs) 23:15, 19 January 2016 (UTC)
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[edit]Hi, Willclisham -- welcome to Wikipedia! As Ian mentioned, the Teahouse is a great resource for new editors. But did you know that Wikipedia also has an extensive help library for common questions? Of course, if you run into a question or problem, you're always welcome to get in touch with me either by email or on my talk page. Happy editing! Fraudoktorkatie (talk) 14:34, 27 January 2016 (UTC)
Peer Review
[edit]Hi!
I really enjoyed reading your article. I am a nursing student so I love reading about stuff like this. I was not aware of all the different areas within pathology! I think you made some really good edits to this article. You also did a good job of staying neutral and adding valid information. With this article being very science based, I am sure it can be hard to not just paraphrase. You did a good job not of not just re writing what was in your sources. You also have really good sources and it seems like you put some effort into finding quality sources before you started making edits to this article. I know this is the first draft and you might already have plans to add more but one suggestion would be to expand the radiation section. In this day in age, in door tanning is a big thing, so you could use that as a specific example to discuss how pathology relates. But also you could discuss the other side of it. Radiation can alter and deform tissue but then you could explain how the use of radiation can be beneficial as a medical treatment. People with cancer can get radiation therapy, so maybe the field of radiation pathology helped to discover the benefits of radiation therapy. I also really like the future of pathology section. It is an addition I would not have thought of. I hope this was somewhat helpful! Good with the rest of your project and the semester! ☺ Lsherry9 (talk) 17:35, 3 April 2016 (UTC)