User talk:YamilBar

This user is a student editor in Illinois_Institute_of_Technology/Seminar_in_Human_Sexuality_(Fall_2021) .

Welcome![edit]

Hello, YamilBar, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:08, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft[edit]

I returned your draft to your sandbox - it's now back at User:YamilBar/Heteroromantic Bisexuality. I moved it back because it isn't nearly well developed enough to be a live article in mainspace.

You have definitions, but they lack sources inline references. (Also Wikipedia articles rarely have definitions sections.) And beyond that, you have three empty sections. You have too many short paragraphs - generally speaking, single-sentence paragraphs are a bad idea, and several of them, one after another, makes everything seem very choppy. You also use bolding - per Wikipedia's style guide, you generally should only bold the article title. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 06:01, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

You also can't use Wikipedia articles as a source on Wikipedia. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 06:02, 4 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]