User talk:YousYaz

This user is a student editor in American_University_of_Beirut/Globalization_and_Migration_(Fall) .

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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:43, 28 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Philippe Fargues moved to draftspace

An article you recently created, Philippe Fargues, is not suitable as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources, especially in the 'Biography' section which is currently unreferenced (Wikipedia has a strict policy on supporting articles on living people with particularly strong references). (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Wikipedia). I've moved your draft to draftspace (with a prefix of "Draft:" before the article title) where you can incubate the article with minimal disruption. When you feel the article meets Wikipedia's general notability guideline and thus is ready for mainspace, please click on the "Submit your draft for review!" button at the top of the page. DoubleGrazing (talk) 08:26, 26 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Philippe Fargues (May 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Primefac were:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft needs to be fundamentally rewritten. At the moment it is a (not very short) summary of Fargues' works, and not about Fargues himself. True, we should have a paragraph or two on each of his philosophies, but they should be from the perspective of other people (i.e. ditch his own works). We want to know about him and what he does; if people want to read more they can follow the references. Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Philippe Fargues and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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Primefac (talk) 14:03, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Philippe Fargues

Hello, YousYaz. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Philippe Fargues, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:01, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]