User talk:Zvines/Delgado Drive
Hey! I hope all is well. My name is Adrian. I'm one of your peer review editors. I wanted to let you know that I've left some feedback on your page. Let me know if you have any questions.
Best, AJ
Draft Feedback
[edit]The content you are developing is looking very good. Remember to slow down and explore the ideas you present more thoroughly. There's probably some more information on Isaac Delgado we can find to supplement the brief description you currently provide, for example. Be careful of your tone. This sentence, for example, is too casual and too biased: "Even though New Orleans has a city vibe, Delgado Drive has more of a suburban environment."
You're having some trouble with your citations. It's not enough to list the URLs at the end of the page. You need to use the citation tool to insert a citation at the end of each paraphrase in the article itself.
That picture is great, but it needs some context. Give it a clear but concise caption.
Nice work so far!