Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Alexander Dennis Enviro 500/archive1

Self nomination. This article has been peer-reviewed and the introduction section is expanded. 61.10.4.84 05:52, 26 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]

Object - After reading this article, I know much more about low-floor buses and trains (but only because I got curious and looked it up). I'd love to read a great article about a bus I've neither seen nor heard of before, but on this one, much work needs to be done to get there:

The writing is sloppy - In places, sounds a bit like rough translation: integrated with all advantages of Transbus and its subsidiaries or and good reputation was made by the passengers.
Much of it is lists - Most of the article is listings, in one format or another, of various technical details, with little to no context.
No overall context and history - It's a doubledecker bus. Why was it built? What niche does it fill in the World of Buses? What is its design history? Is it in a class of its own for some reason, or which are its competitors? How much does it cost? What is it particularly good at? These are some of the questions that should be answered. As it is, this bus doesn't come to life for me whatsoever...

There is more, but I think the above already requires significant work beyond tweaking. --Tsavage 21:47, 28 November 2005 (UTC)[reply]