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The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The list was archived by PresN via FACBot (talk) 23:31, 12 February 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

NWA World Welterweight Championship

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Nominator(s):  MPJ-DK  17:59, 29 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

This is my second time nominating this for FL, the first time it failed more because of lack of input than any unresolved issues in the list. I came back to this one after taking several other similar lists to FL status such as Mexican National Lightweight Championship, Mexican National Light Heavyweight Championship and List of current CMLL Championships. This list has incorporated all comments and feedback I have received from other FLC, FAC or GAN processes I have been through for Mexican based professional wrestling championships. As always I am looking forward to getting any and all feedback to improve this list.  MPJ-DK  17:59, 29 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Comments from ChrisTheDude
    • "The promotion had control of the championship from 1946 until, 1996 " - no need for that comma after "until"
    • "up until 2007 where it returned" - should probably be "when" rather than "where"
    • "its holders were determined" - presumably they still are..........?
    • "the title was given the NWA-prefix" - don't think the dash is needed in "NWA prefix"
    • "The championship vacated due after outside interference" => "The championship was vacated due after outside interference"
    • "The championship was vacated by YOSSINO in order to for him to concentrate" - seems a bit mangled at the end...........
    • "The official weight of some of the champions have not been documented" => "The official weights of some of the champions have not been documented"
  • That's it for now..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:58, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • ChrisTheDude that you for your input, greatly appreciated. I believe I have addressed all your concerns?  MPJ-DK  21:40, 2 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Some more stuff I've spotted:
    • "its holders are by promoters or promotions, not by athletic competition" - missing word there I think
      • Yes it was missing the word "Determined" before "by"
    • "EMLL vacated the championship for verified reasons." - I'm guessing this should be unverified reasons......?
      • Totally right, good catch.
    • Something seems to have gone a bit odd with the row immediately below Chamaco valaguez' reign
      • Fixed.
    • Also, you have a lot of very short sentences in the lead, and I'd check whether they can be combined into longer sentences which could flow better. For example, you have "In 1996 and 1997 the championship was defended as part of the J-Crown until the J-Crown was broken up into the original individual championships by the end of 1997. The championship was once again inactive after the J-Crown concept was abandoned. The Championship was inactive until over a year later when Dragon Kid became the first Toryumon-promoted champion", which could be written in a much more "punchy" style as "In 1996 and 1997 the championship was defended as part of the J-Crown until the J-Crown was broken up into the original individual championships, after which it was once again inactive until early 1999 when Dragon Kid became the first Toryumon-promoted champion"
  • Hope this helps -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 12:48, 3 November 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    • I made the last update that you suggested ChrisTheDude, I apologize for not responding sooner, at some point this was taken off my watch list and I only say it when TRM so kindly ping'ed me to get my attention. Hope this has addressed all your concerns?  MPJ-DK  16:14, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]
  • Support - looks OK now -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:05, 18 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

MPJ-DK are you still hoping to complete this nomination? The Rambling Man (talk) 11:28, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • The Rambling Man thank you for the mention, I no longer had this on my watchlist for some unnown reason. I have not addressed ChrisTheDude's last comment but I will address that right away. And to answer the question, yes I am still hoping to bring this one to FL status.  MPJ-DK  16:09, 16 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

This nomination has been open for more than 3 months without enough discussion, so closing as stalled. --PresN 00:38, 12 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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