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2008 ACC Championship Game

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I've listed this article for peer review because per WP:FT requirements, this has to be peer reviewed per bla bla bla. Read it here at criterion 3.c. The actual creator of the FT gave me permission to start this PR. I'm not particularily familiar with the subject, but I'll ask Brook if I have any questions.

Thanks, Pie is good ^{(Apple is the best)} 22:25, 6 September 2008 (UTC)

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs):

• Date-linking is now deprecated by the MOS.
• It should be mentioned in the lead that Jacksonville was the former site of the game.
• "The ACC Championship Game traditionally matches up the winner of the Coastal and Atlantic Divisions of the Atlantic Coast Conference."
• "First played in 2005, the game came about as a result of the league's 2004 expansion, which added former Big East members Miami, Virginia Tech, and (in 2005) Boston College." "came about"-->was created.
• "A hard-fought game between the two teams resulted in a 30-16 Virginia Tech victory." It's obvious the game was between the two teams.
• "Even before Virginia Tech was declared the 2007 ACC football champion, cities other than Jacksonville (site of the 2007 ACC Championship Game) presented their plans to be the site of the 2008 ACC Championship Game."
• "Prior to the beginning of the 2008 college football season, the annual poll of members of the media who cover ACC football resulted in the Clemson Tigers being picked to win the Atlantic Division and Virginia Tech being picked to win the Coastal Division, with both predicted to participate in that season's ACC football championship game." Needs a rewrite: "Prior to the beginning of the 2008 college football season, the annual poll of members of the media who cover ACC football picked Clemson to win the Atlantic Division and Virginia Tech to win the Coastal Division. Both teams were predicted to play in that season's ACC football championship game."

All fixed with this diff: [1]. Pie is good ^{(Apple is the best)} 21:40, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Cool, I think the article meets the FT standards now. Dabomb87 (talk) 22:01, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Actually, it just needs to be peer reviewed so the FT can stay an FT. Pie is good ^{(Apple is the best)} 23:07, 15 September 2008 (UTC)