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Any comments or contributions are helpful. Comments regarding tone, style and page structure would be useful. - Zepheus <ツィフィアス> 21:46, 2 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

  • Well on it's way article. I'm glad you have 13 citations but I would recommend expanding upon this. Reading the fair use rationale for one of the image there appears to a book regarding the film series titled "The Book of Alien" which I'm assuming is the source of most of the content. If you could get your hands on it that would be great, considering "Early versions" and other sections completely lacking citations. Where is the film's budget, profit, criticism, critical review information? The 2 sentence section - "Spin-offs" could be expanded. Good luck - Tutmosis 23:05, 2 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Well even though its already a long page some more content focusing on H.R.Giger's wirk on the movie would be nice. his website www.giger.com offers alot of information on it. Ill also keep my eye out for any apearences in pop culture. The webcomic explosm.net had a comic I could load up but I doubt thats note-able. Isaac Witte 04:35, 21 January 2007 (UTC)