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General feedback would be useful on this article. Seeing what needs to be added would be useful as well. --Midnighttonight 02:43, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
- My comments:
- The lead is too short, remember that it should summarize the rest of the content.
- Does anyone now his age or birth date?
- Specially in the history I noticed that the grammar could be improved, unfortunately, mine is not very good either. Someone else could probably check the writing.
- Try not to place one image after another, because that causes the edit buttons to be placed incorrectly near the bottom (at least in Firefox). Instead, place the images individually in each section. You could place some in the left side too.
- References seemed to stop after the sociology section. Also, using the <references/> tool would be better, though not necessary.
- I'm not 100% positive about this, but is it a good idea to talk about that Wikipedia article in the Wikipedia article?
Good job! --Enano275 22:27, 13 May 2006 (UTC)
- I suggest looking at, and following advice of, Wikipedia:What_is_a_featured_article, [1].moza 13:05, 19 May 2006 (UTC)