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I've listed this article for peer review because… I am really eager to have a GA article and know there are things I know I've missed. But for things to really look out for would 1) be plagiarism... even the slightest bit. 2) Mis-content or lack of citation. 3) Grammar 4) Any additional help! I appreciate this so much. Thank You, Stanfordbound 14 (talk) 02:00, 19 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by StringTheory11

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  • What does it's scientific name mean?
  • A description of the differences between the Java form and the Bali form would help.
  • What exactly entails a "true stingray?"
  • More peer-reviewed sources would be nice.
  • The image captions could use a bit more description.
  • A lot of the sentences could probably be combined to make for a smoother flow.
  • Predators section either needs expansion or should be merged into another section; same with conservation section.
  • I can't discern at all what the parasites section is trying to say. I recommend a rewrite.
  • What is the size of the ray, both length and weight?