Wikipedia:Peer review/Cell nucleus/archive1

Cell nucleus

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Peer_review/Cell_nucleus

Please comment. Nb. there are 2 more images coming (one of the nuclear pore, and one (hopefully) of a stained cell). Also re. the to do list on the talk page, these are nitty gritty things, and in truth not vital to the article, even (dare I say) a FA.ShaiM 13:54, 2 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The lead needs to be expanded into a comprehensive summary of the entire article, per WP:LEAD. -Fsotrain₀₉ 15:12, 5 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I'll have a look at this in more detail later, but a first impression is that the organisation of the article is not as clear as it could be. I suggest dividing the existing sections into major categories (bolded). And then into sub-categories i.e.

Structure

Structural sub-categories. Good as it is. But include organisation of chromosomes hetero/euchromatin into this section.

Function

Role in cell compartmentation

Transcription

Dynamics and regulation

Nuclear transport

Assembly and disassembly

Anucleated and polynucleated cells

Evolution of the nucleus

TimVickers 16:46, 5 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 15:52, 17 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've restructured per recommendation. I'll try and start working on the lead in a day or so.ShaiM 04:55, 7 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]